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The Bouquet Lyrics Critique - Indie song

by Callum McCartney
(UK)

Steel structures tear down my dreams
Shoved in front of tidal schemes
Plastic power pushes us down
Enveloping me asking them to drown

The pieces of a failed generation
Left to us to create any flotation
Thrown off my feet by a inimitable contrast
Yearn for the dead hand of the past


Soon all those forgotten will combust
Neglecting travel for their powered lust
Time to destroy discretion
Throw away any trace of caution
The unreal's more powerful anyway
Thorn in a rose disguised as a bouquet


Everything looks pure as you see
Push them hard enough, watch them flee
Seeing the rest as helpless machines
' They wont even take our vaccines '

Just one slip pushes a mistake
Your emerge and begin a convincing fake
A superficial attempt to try and confess
Claiming the truth, takes no time to digress


Soon all those forgotten will combust
Neglecting travel for their powered lust
Time to destroy discretion
Throw away any trace of caution
The unreal's more powerful anyway
Thorn in a rose disguised as a bouquet


Splitting worlds through the silver shine
While opening pressing into confine
Take me with you..
Take me with you

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