"The Addiction" - Lyrics Critique - Alternative

by John
(Mahomet, IL, United States of America)

so, this is just a song i wrote for my girlfriend. let me know what you think, john94xc@gmail.com


( )= background voice
{ }= all voices

V1
ive made my choices
and youve made yours
and so much for "never again"
somehow i knew we'd be more than friends

V2
if three words are too many
ill settle for one kiss
as long as the addiction's under control
but you know how i get when im on a roll

BRIDGE
so just step back
before all hell breaks loose
youre a heart attack
but thats prefered to losing (you---)

CHORUS
you just can control me like
no other in this place (in this place)
if i just cant get through the night
ive still got your shining {face me down---}
down down, for the final round
but i cant quite get myself up off the ground
you call for me, call for me
baby, im addicted to what youve done to me

V3
if midnight blue doesnt bother you
ill mark down the pages of our chapter
because im sure youll wanna know
it wont fade, and {i wont go}

CHORUS

INTERLUDE
for the record,
i cant breathe
and off the record,
i cant sleep
thoughts of our last kiss keep
washing over me
baby, you cant be donw with me---

CHORUS X2

OUTRO
im addicted to what youve done to me
(im addicted to---)
{im addicted to what youve done to me}