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Texas Moonlight- Country - By: Peyton Day

by Peyton Day
(Italy, Texas, United States)

Girl it's been to long since i've seen your face
I haven't felt your touch in way to many days
there's something about you that keeps drawing me near
everytime i haer your voice....in my ear

Chorus
Don't worry babe im coming home to your arms
Don't waoory baby we ain't got to be far apart
let's take it slow girl we've got al night
ket's just lay here under that sweet....texas moonlight


We've had trials yeah we've had our sturggles
but dirl we've made it through all them troubles
we've stuck it out them damn punches are gone
let's just lay here and make love....until dawn

Chorus 2x


Give me a lot of feedbeck on this song please and thank you

Sincerely, Peyton Day




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Texas Moonlight- Country - By: Peyton Day

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Mar 08, 2009
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Texas Moonlight
by: Anonymous

The title is interesting.
The title is only said once in your lyrics.
Talk about the Texas Moonlight.
Does it shine brighter with her?
Is it a lovers moon?

This is a good idea.The hook should mention your
title a couple of times.

Mar 20, 2009
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planning on writing more to it?
by: Anonymous

Maybe more lyrics, the title doesn't make the song

Aug 17, 2009
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The title dosn't make the song,but it helps
by: Lonnie

I thought it was perfect just the way it is. And Texas Moonlight is mentioned three times, I think thats plenty. I give it five stars

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