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"Teeth Marks" Lyrics Critique - Indie Song

by Danny
(Birmingham)

You're not prepared
You were caught unaware
Try remain detered
To avoid that rant
That only precedes, trouble

Somethings boiling
Not what you'd think
Those beads of sweat
Straight from the brink
No emergency release pull
I think it's time to...

Create a few teeth marks
Say nothing instead
You know they're wrong
But don't be a dickhead

They're playing the mouth
Just like a drum
Beating bullshit
Don't jump the gun
Take a deep breath
And...

Create a few teeth marks
Say nothing instead
This guys a clown
Just let him drown

Put your Tongue away
Switch the safety latch
Avoid that sticky patch

Create a few teeth marks
Say nothing instead
Your bigger than that
So don't be a, twat.

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