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Taking over lyrics feedback - R'n'b song
by Dec Tomlinson
(Luton, Bedforshire, England)
I try to focus, but its you thats there, everywhere i go its you, my imagination seems hazy, i think of us, and it all becomes clear, where i wanna go, where ive been, things ive seen, all i wanna see, is you sleeping beside me, the sun will fall down, but tommorows a new day, i dunno what to say, but follow me, take my hand, i need you close, cause when you fall away, its you im reminiscing, your taking over me x2 you think it would easy, but your there to please me, thats exactly what your doing, i think of our moments, bad thoughts are neglected, il make sure your protected, never let you go again, i need to become a man, to be the man you want me to be, but you see, il change for you, whatever it takes, thats a promise, il hold you down, baby dont make a sound, take my hand, i need you close, cause when you fall away, its you im reminiscing, your taking over me x2
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