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take your pictures - lyrics critique [:

by kelseyyy[:
(WiScOnSiN[:)

TAKE YOUR PICTURES


VERSE ONE:
Headline of tomorrow
Got my picture on the front page
Yeah, man, I famous,
Didn’t know it would go this way
Oooo, people I need my space
So just go, just get out of my face!

CHORUS:
So paparazzi take your pictures
And your magazine might be read
Make up some more stories
Try to get in my head
You wanna know my secrets
Here’s some advice
Click your heels together
And say (man) I need a life

VERSE TWO:
Story of the century
4 page spread of some made up scandal
Yeah, guys, im famous,
Didn’t think it’d be this bad
Oooo, people I need my space
So just go, just get out of my face!

(chorus)

BRIDGE:
Im just a girl
What more do you want from me
Just trying to move on
From the things you blame on me
Back off, oh, back off

Yeah-ayy-oo-yeahh

(chorus) x2 ? ?


what do you think? two chorus' at the end, or one?




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Feb 16, 2009
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nice
by: Alexis

I can actually hear Britney or Avril LAvigne singing this well. I like it and would listen to it often haha

Feb 24, 2009
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wow
by: Catherine Talbot

That's a really cool song, and I love the way the lyrics are put together.

Apr 24, 2009
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Neat thoughts...
by: ~RES~

I like your perspective. The lyrics work quite well- none of it seems akward or anything. Overall, I hear an tone of annoyance with the crazy paparazzi and whatnot. The singer is obviously having a hard time and not totally enjoying being famous. Could you add a little more, maybe in the bridge, about the reporters not seing the real you, the beautiful girl hidden behind the walls of superficiality and gossip? Just a thought- nice work. :)
~RES~

Dec 17, 2009
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I Have A Similiar Song.
by: La La Lee La La La La La, La La La La La, Le La La La La Laa.

I Have The Same Song As This It's Called Famous, But Different Words :)
Great Song :D x

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