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Take You Down Lyrics Crtitique - Pop

by Kim Paquette
(Canada)

1st Verse:

just give it time
for that star to fly
you too busy noticing, that you might be...
invisible
just take it from the start, and never go back...
again
cause theres always someone else,
trying to take you down

CHORUS:

it's too late to pretend
i know you better than i know myself
dont take it back again
always someone else melting your heart away
just never let
(never let)
them take you down

2nd Verse:

i held your hand
and it felt like a movie
i already made plans but you were already moving
on to someone else
its like your floating away
now i can see, how bad you felt
and you dont seem to care

CHORUS:

it's too late to pretend
i know you better than i know myself
dont take it back again
always someone else melting your heart away
just never let
(never let)
them take you downn

3rd Verse:

im tired of watsing all my time
my heart is hanging by a thread
you and i will never be a whole
ever again

CHORUSx2:

it's too late to pretend
i know you better than i know myself
dont take it back again
always someone else melting your heart away
just never let
(never let)

it's too late to pretend
i know you better than i know myself
dont take it back again
always someone else melting your heart away
just never let
them take you down




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Aug 04, 2009
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by: kels

loved it. nice job!

Aug 29, 2009
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fix it
by: Anonymous

third verse man its waisting

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