Sweat Ladder Lyric Critique Rap/Rock song

by Jack
(Northfield,MN)

Verse 1:
View of a ladder,
There is nothing sadder,
Then no view of the top,
But I got no reason to stop,
This is where my dream begins,
My life count is ten,
Don't try to make me stop,
Cause when I fall down I get up and walk,
Even though the steps show no signs of victory,
My conscience seems to constantly whisper me,
I cant drop the work that needs done,
How can I find a silver bullet and shoot the gun,
that's the question I ask,
to resolve my task,
But I wont back down No I won't come in last,
I run fast, No I won't come in last,
Gun blast, the past, is the past

Chorus:
Wake up to sound of the bitter air talking,
Get up, fall down, stand keep walking,
The only way, you won't reach it,
Is to def your mind and by forgetting to preach it,
Find it, release it, make your torch lit,
Check your goals or throw a fit,
Just Don't allow yourself to fall into pit

Verse 2:
I am a fighting force,
I use my brain as fuel, its a powerful source,
I won't show remorse,
to my failures along the way,
Giving up on the climb is a price you pay,
Sweat, blood, fight and tears,
Are the only way to defeat failures fear,
One life, one chance, one footprint to leave,
Change the circle, teach, believe,
Feel relieved,
When you leave this planet,
Make a memory, let society have it,
Fight, To change the hell,
that we brought to the surface,
as we hide in a oyster shell,
No quitting, No defeat,
Don't fall to your knees and allow yourself beat,
No defeat

Verse 3:
Over, done, nothing left to say,
Roll life's die, change the way its played,
Seek new challenges,
repair the damages,
Heal with bandages,
Consume and handle this,
Add a new mind to this world today,
Educate, make your fate, change our ways,
society's layers lay and lay,
one, after the other,
Stop, them from placing another,
strip after strip,
rip after rip,
Sometimes shit can be changed with one fit,
My mouth is shut now I close the lid,
Go back to the innocence of being a kid.