Stronger Lyrics Critique - Rock Alternative Song

by Reija

I'm a little nervous about this but I hope I'll get positive feedback. Took me about ten minutes... Pretty much about a girl realizing that she wants to be stronger mentally than she was and stop going back to the man that abused her.

Verse1

Shattered into pieces,
scattered on the floor
Careful not to step on any
or I might hurt myself more

Chorus

Oh,oh, I wish I was stronger
Strong enough to keep myself together
And I'll never forgive myself
For breaking down in front of you
But I know that I can make it better

Verse2

Watch the wind sweep me away
into God-knows-where
Watch you smile so sickly
like this is what you planned
to see me broken beyond repair
Well I hate the look in you eyes
I'm not an empty shell; dead inside
I won't come crawling back to you
As if you're the only reason
I have left to live my life

Chorus

Oh,oh, I'm gonna be stronger
Strong enough to keep myself together
And I'll never forgive myself
For breaking down in front of you
But I will make it better

Bridge:

This isn't what you expected
The cycle is broken
Now you can go find
Someone else to be your playtoy and
I won't regret leaving
I should've left a long time ago
But now I see that I could always stand on my own

Chorus

Oh,oh, I'm gonna be stronger
Strong enough to keep myself together
And I'll never forgive myself
For breaking down in front of you
But I will make it better