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strike line lyrics critque rock song

by david olsen
(keokuk iowa)

strike line
standing at the strike line
going over these feelings of mine
goverment says there is nothing we can do
but just let the scabs on threw
(chorus)
strike line thats where i spend my time
strike line their all friends of mine
just remember before you cross our line
it may be you next time strike line

why do they listen to them say
ten dollar's a hour is to much to pay
union wages are ruining this land
if you listen your playing right into their hands
(chorus)
strike line thats where i spend my time
strike line their all friends of mine
just remember before you cross our line
it may be you next time strike line

if it wasn't for union's it would be
like it was in the 18th century
a nickle a day to much to pay
for a 20 hour work day
(chorus)

strike line thats where i spend my time
strike line their all friends of mine
just remember before you cross our line
it may be you next time strike line

hire a ten year old boy if they please
and work him untill he bleeds
no restictions on what they do
even if they kill a boy or two
(chorus)
strike line thats where i spend my time
strike line their all friends of mine
just remember before you cross our line
it may be you next time strike line




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Aug 16, 2009
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by: Anonymous

There's a bit of confusion between the chorus(you are talking to someone- a scab crossing the line?) and the second verse (why do THEY listen...if YOU listen...). I think you need to change it so that you are either talking to someone specifically OR you are giving your view to everyone in general (1st, 3rd & 4th verses). By the way, the last word in the first verse should be "through or thru".

Is the chorus sung like this:
strike line
thats where i spend my time
strike line
their all friends of mine
just remember before you cross our line
it may be you next time
strike line
?
Seems like it.

Aug 19, 2009
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I thought it was good
by: Lonnie

I'm not a rock fan, I don't know how the lyrics flow in too many rock songs, but I liked the words to this, no matter what kind of song it is, I also think thats what makes a good song. Good writing, keep it up

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