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Stop the heartache rock ballad or country - lyrics critique

by Dylan York
(Texas)

The city lights
The cool night air
Baby i wish you were here
So i could play with your hair
Im tired of spending these nights alone
When are you coming home?
Just come down that old dirt road
That stretches on for days
But i know you never will
You to stuck in your ways

Stop the heartache
Just let me go away
Release from your prison
Release me from this pain

I just wanna know
That this feeling will never go
No matter how long your gone for
i will still be waiting at the door
Its just too bad you wont ever come back
You have settled in somewhere else
So lets just face the facts
Love is an emotion you lack

Stop the heartache
Just let me go away
Release me from your prison
Release me from this pain

Finally after all these years
You put that dagger through my chest
You said you don't care to cry anymore tears
We can finally put all this to rest
I wish you the best

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