still dreaming -- lyric critique

by kelsey
(wisconsin)

i wrote this one night when i couldnt sleep.. haha.


Still Dreaming

2 am, I lie down deep in slumber
feelings are falling downward
I want to forget
Waking up, I hear the way your voice sounds
My heart starts to pound now?
To the rhythm of yours
You?re so angelic, you words so symphonic
Touch your lips to my soul, eat this sorrow away
How am I so lucky I found you?

Sometimes I feel like I?m still dreaming
It seems like everyday, you?re always on my mind
This is how we stay so connected, so connected
Over space and time

When we talk about all my old drama
You look at me and wonder why I?m not insane
Every week, the days seem to get longer
But you know our love gets stronger, with every word we say
Stronger everyday
You know I would do anything for you

Sometimes I feel like I?m still dreaming
It seems like everyday, you?re always on my mind
This is how we stay so connected, so connected
Over space and time

If you are feeling down, you know I feel it, now
We give each other strength to make it through the darkness
You take me to a place I never want to leave
I?m in me deepest dream I don?t ever want to wake up
I?ll fight til I die I wont say goodbye, I wont let this pass me by

Sometimes I feel like I?m still dreaming
It seems like everyday, you?re always on my mind
This is how we stay so connected, so connected
Over space and time

Lets run away, run away, run away now
Lets go away, go away to some place safe
I want it all now, now I want everything

This is how we stay so connected, so connected
Over space and time