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Starry Nights Lyrics Critique - Acoustic (Not sure what genre it is...?)

by Lexie

Verse 1: I am sick of staring at stars
Trying to heal scars
We all know, it’s more than just skin deep
Trace patterns in the sky
With our eyes
And open arms hoping answers
Fall into our hands
Looking for truth in what was left

Chorus: So just go....
I’m sick of seeing your face....
Haunting my dreams
Keeping me awake
So just leave
And take a part of me
There’s no getting away
Keep me running without the chase

Verse 2: Tell me, what use does it do?
Honestly the stars were captivating
But Darling so were you.
So where does that leave me?
A broken heart can still beat
And tired eyes can still cry
Is it honest this time?

(Chorus)

Verse 3: Things like this always start
With two romantic hearts
Unable to face the fight
Incapable of seeing
Past the rising sun
Unable to face the light
Things like this always end on starry nights

(Chorus)




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Starry Nights Lyrics Critique - Acoustic (Not sure what genre it is...?)

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Jan 15, 2011
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soul searching
by: Danierla

I love the romance in the lyrics. I do not know about the rythmn. However I can not figure out the conflict in your chorus. Feel like it may have made sense if the meaning in the chorus did not conflict with the yeaning in the verses. Would make a soul searching country. Just my opinion!

Feb 03, 2011
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hmm
by: Anonymous

This song is really good, but confusing. It just seems as if it is missing a part which would be the bridge or turning point...and I can't figure out the message. I actually think this could be a rap song like the beginning and someone could sing the chorus. I would also reccomend that you change the title because this has absolutely nothing to do really with a starry night. But I thought this was a really good song but with some adjustments it could be great!

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