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Staples - Lyric Critique

by kelsey
(Wisconsin)

Staples


VERSE ONE:
Of all the things I’ve done wrong
This might be the best
I never said it out loud though
‘Cause you would have laughed

CHORUS:
But I’ll keep quiet
I know when to stop
I wouldn’t worry too much
About what I’m going to say
These staples keep my mouth shut
And that’s how it’s going to stay

VERSE TWO:
Of all the things I’ve never felt
This one might be the worst
I never showed it in public though
‘Cause you would have fallen too fast

INSET:
They hold my mouth shut
To keep all the good things in
While all the bad things
Are escaping through
The creases they have left

CHORUS: (x2)
But I’ll keep quiet
I know when to stop
I wouldn’t worry too much
About what I’m going to say
These staples keep my mouth shut
And that’s how it’s going to stay




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Nov 12, 2008
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by: Anonymous

oh I love that!!!!!!! OMG!!! I feel so much like that song describes.!!!

Nov 23, 2008
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Brilliant Mate!!!
by: Jake

Great song here, reminds me of Buckcherry, if you know who they are. You seem to know how to keep a song interesting with rhymes, which is a great skill that not everyone has. Check out my song, "Time" and tell me what you think!!!

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