http://www.ultimatesongwriting.com/songwriting-blog.html The Ultimate Songwriting Blog keeps you up-to-date with all additions and changes to the ultimatesongwriting.com Web site. Subscribe here. en-us songwriting Sun, 29 Jan 2012 14:11:18 GMT Sun, 29 Jan 2012 14:11:18 GMT ultimatesongwriting.com http://www.ultimatesongwriting.com/how-to-start-writing-a-song.html How do you start writing a song, that's always my problem in writing a song. I do it for fun because I love singing and what's better to do than sing your Sun, 29 Jan 2012 14:11:14 GMT http://www.ultimatesongwriting.com/prisoner-of-mind-lyrics-critique-no-genre-but-possibly-slow.html Prisoner of mind...visitor of blackness at night... Hello, where's your grin, the one you wear when the doctor's are in? Have the voices stopped? Do they Sun, 29 Jan 2012 14:07:07 GMT http://www.ultimatesongwriting.com/see-you-again-lyrics-critique-pop-song.html my very first song! :) tell me what you think about it! :) Your smile’s what keeps me movin’ around Your eyes I’m always thinkin’ about I’ve been lost Sun, 29 Jan 2012 14:06:15 GMT http://www.ultimatesongwriting.com/is-heartbreak-a-compound-word-lyric-feedback-country.html I am new here and not too sure what I am doing (yet) but I write a lot of lyrics and have collaborated with others on some but I want to get more out there Sun, 29 Jan 2012 14:05:49 GMT http://www.ultimatesongwriting.com/whats-the-point-lyrics-popcountry.html This is the first song I ever wrote...Hope you guys like it. And tell me what you think *p.s please be honest....Thank you :) What's The Point Verse Sun, 29 Jan 2012 14:04:38 GMT http://www.ultimatesongwriting.com/edited-i-never-thought-that-love-could-be-lyrics-critique.html I never thought that Love could be by james Cook (Vietnam) I never thought that love could be 4 me I never thought love i never thought that love could Sun, 29 Jan 2012 14:04:01 GMT http://www.ultimatesongwriting.com/everyday-matters-lyric-critique-country.html Would love some feedback on my lyric and would love someone to do the music as well. Everyday Matters © 2010 Cindy Prince I’m frying eggs, making Sun, 29 Jan 2012 14:03:38 GMT http://www.ultimatesongwriting.com/you-surprise-me-country-lyrics-charlie-in-alabama.html After 31 years of marrige my wife still surprises me so I wrote this for her. You Surprise Me Just when I think/ I‘ve got you figured out/ And I Sun, 29 Jan 2012 14:03:11 GMT http://www.ultimatesongwriting.com/why-the-ghetto-crys-tonight-lyrics-critique.html Hook) R&B / Rap Spoken word) Can u tell me why The Ghetto cry’s tonight? She’s been through so Much heart ache and pain She’s cries like Sun, 29 Jan 2012 14:02:54 GMT http://www.ultimatesongwriting.com/im-past-caring-for-you-lyrics-critique-pop.html Author: John Knight ©2012 John Knight I'm Past Caring for You (Verse 1) Well let me tell you I think you're lying 'Cos your voice is shaking too I don't Sun, 29 Jan 2012 14:02:29 GMT http://www.ultimatesongwriting.com/ill-wait-4-u-lyrics-critique.html I’ll wait 4-u a Million years just to hear you say I love you Dear, and you will always be right here with love and care. through the years.... I'll Sun, 29 Jan 2012 14:02:12 GMT http://www.ultimatesongwriting.com/because-i-love-you-lyrics-critique-pop.html Author: John Knight ©2012 John Knight Because I Love You (Verse 1) The sun came out I saw you smile The birds they sang For a long long while You sang Sun, 29 Jan 2012 14:01:41 GMT http://www.ultimatesongwriting.com/the-hideout-maces-hole-beulah-colorado.html We have a fully-equipped recording studio to fit any budget, any project, from pre-production through mixing through getting your CD ready to hit the shelves. Tue, 17 Jan 2012 16:48:25 GMT http://www.ultimatesongwriting.com/soul-of-new-orleans-countrysoulrock-lyrics-critique.html This song was influenced alot by the music of the '70's through to the early '90's. Storytelling in music is not so common these days, but I'd be interested Tue, 17 Jan 2012 16:43:20 GMT http://www.ultimatesongwriting.com/my-geisha-girl-lyrics-critique.html Intro) O my geisha girl You open up my eyes now I can see brand new light the way you change my life with you is truly paradise..... (Hook) O my geisha Tue, 17 Jan 2012 16:41:24 GMT http://www.ultimatesongwriting.com/gota-lyrics-critique.html Songwriter poet By James Cook Title Gota, jaycook2001@hotmail.com Gota make it, Gota Hammer, Gota take it, gota face it, to many years wasted it, Tue, 17 Jan 2012 16:40:34 GMT http://www.ultimatesongwriting.com/let-me-be-the-one-lyrics-critique.html Let me look into your eyes Let me give you a new brand life let me take away all your pain Let me be your Shelter through Rain Let me be your shoulder Tue, 17 Jan 2012 16:38:33 GMT http://www.ultimatesongwriting.com/another-suicide-emo-acoustic-lyrics-critique.html A broken life and living a lie All she wanted was to end all the pain and take away her life She was a girl so happy as she seemed to be But on the Wed, 11 Jan 2012 12:52:17 GMT http://www.ultimatesongwriting.com/writing-to-a-music-producers-track-copyright.html I have been fortunate enough to meet with a music producer who has shopped his beats to a lot of celebrity R&B artists and he has asked me to write to Wed, 11 Jan 2012 12:51:20 GMT http://www.ultimatesongwriting.com/peachtree-road-studio-atlanta-georgia.html Peachtree Road Studio is the creation of life-long musician Ross Harrell. Playing music and recording since I was 5-years-old, I know as much there is Fri, 06 Jan 2012 14:01:31 GMT http://www.ultimatesongwriting.com/jenny-penny-lyrics-critique-country.html Author: John Knight ©2012 John Knight Jenny Penny (Verse 1) Jenny Penny, look my way Jenny Penny, come and play You're the sweetest girl I've ever seen Fri, 06 Jan 2012 13:58:51 GMT http://www.ultimatesongwriting.com/once-in-a-lifetime-lyric-critique-alternative.html the general back ground is that i met someone at a park and we were great friends from the start and he had to leave the next day and he had changed me Fri, 06 Jan 2012 13:57:56 GMT http://www.ultimatesongwriting.com/alone-lyrics-critique-rockblues.html baby boy living on his own trying to make it on all alone finds it hard to live in the dark lost his dad, hates his mom moved away went the old fashion Fri, 06 Jan 2012 13:55:48 GMT http://www.ultimatesongwriting.com/all-you-need-is-love-lyrics-critique-rb-song-by-melissa.html (Chorus) 2x Baby, I got this thunder in my heart 'Cause your sweet love is like a brand new start for me I'm dyin ' little by little each day without you Sun, 01 Jan 2012 16:50:20 GMT http://www.ultimatesongwriting.com/random-axe-of-violence-critique-heavy-rock.html Author: John Knight ©2011 John Knight Random Axe of Violence (Verse 1) Jogging Snogging People in the park Walking Stalking Victims after dark Random Sun, 01 Jan 2012 16:49:49 GMT http://www.ultimatesongwriting.com/another-round-lyrics-critique.html Misery loves company and loneliness seems to be my only friend So I pop the top on a bottle and drink it at full throttle Hoping my pain will mend Tue, 27 Dec 2011 12:29:30 GMT http://www.ultimatesongwriting.com/a-line-to-cross-to-bear-lyrics-critique-folkindie.html First true attempt at songwriting (I'm 16). First half of this song was written months ago with a positive outlook of the future. I was getting ready Tue, 27 Dec 2011 12:27:31 GMT http://www.ultimatesongwriting.com/a-legend-carries-on-country-song-lyrics-critique.html AUDIO (Acoustic) http://soundcloud.com/tim-horne/vn620059 A LEGEND CARRIES ON, original by Tim Horne (LYRICS) I will always remember, how we use to Tue, 27 Dec 2011 12:25:12 GMT http://www.ultimatesongwriting.com/need-your-thoughts-for-some-wordsphrasing-country-ballad.html Working on a song, and need your thoughts on some of the words/phrasing I'm debating on. Where you see the ( ) its the 2 words/phrase I'm debating on. Tue, 27 Dec 2011 12:23:57 GMT http://www.ultimatesongwriting.com/unforgettable-soldier-lyrics-critique.html Every night When they dreamed They remembered the wait that seemed to last forever the time they thought he died until they got the letter how he came Tue, 20 Dec 2011 12:22:21 GMT http://www.ultimatesongwriting.com/runaway-baby-pop-ballad-by-lauren-laine-lyrics-critique.html She lays her head upon her pillow not knowing what there was to follow her heart keeps on racing with every word he is saying and tears fall from her eyes Sun, 18 Dec 2011 20:35:49 GMT http://www.ultimatesongwriting.com/all-the-things-i-cant-replace-lyrics-critique.html ALL The things I can't replace Like your smile upon your face your Warmth and your embrace your LOve and touch that's why i need you so much.... Sun, 18 Dec 2011 20:35:25 GMT http://www.ultimatesongwriting.com/waiting-on-superman-lyrics-critique.html This song is R&B/pop, most likely a ballad, but it really depends on the instrumental I find that fits. 1st verse: So much energy just to be superwoman Sun, 18 Dec 2011 20:35:02 GMT http://www.ultimatesongwriting.com/heart-for-sale-lyrics-critique-pop.html Author: John Knight ©2011 John Knight Heart for Sale (Verse 1) Heart for sale I don't need it All those women they just bleed it I feel so sad I wanna Sun, 18 Dec 2011 20:32:17 GMT http://www.ultimatesongwriting.com/the-blocks-be-talking-lyrics-critique.html The blocks be talking Dead man walking Body shaking, 25 life facing, in my Cell pasoning In hell debating, Like I'm making deals with Satan Ever Thu, 15 Dec 2011 11:42:50 GMT http://www.ultimatesongwriting.com/a-christmas-day-lyrics-critique-pop.html Author: John Knight ©2011 John Knight A Christmas Day (Verse 1) Snow's falling Mama's calling Table's set Lunch at one It's December I remember Merry Thu, 15 Dec 2011 11:39:13 GMT http://www.ultimatesongwriting.com/table-for-two-lyrics-critique-country-ballad-mid-tempo.html V1: I sat down alone at a table for one That should have been a table for two I saw a couple in love acting like fools The way that we used to do I thought Thu, 15 Dec 2011 11:35:52 GMT http://www.ultimatesongwriting.com/table-talk-lyrics-critique-soulreggae-acoustic-its-a-satirical-song.html I am shrewd Got the tools I control the markets I'm smarter than you I am crude Sometimes rude I have the man-power I'm much more than you I'm no fool, Thu, 15 Dec 2011 11:34:44 GMT http://www.ultimatesongwriting.com/beautiful-babies-lyrics-critique.html Hello, I just wrote this song, it is going to be a part of my first album, and I'm having a hard time finding a melody that flows. So I think I may have Fri, 09 Dec 2011 18:56:03 GMT http://www.ultimatesongwriting.com/prince-charming-lyrics-critique.html The way you make me feel it's all real, and I can't even reveal the real deal of how I hate that I can't think straight anymore, don't know what to Fri, 09 Dec 2011 18:55:04 GMT http://www.ultimatesongwriting.com/tomorrow-lyrics-critique.html This is a song about a homeless girl, please give me any feedback. :) V1: She sits on the corner of a busy street, Her pride as dirty as her feet, Fri, 09 Dec 2011 18:54:38 GMT http://www.ultimatesongwriting.com/its-all-about-a-cross-lyrics-critique1.html IT'S ALL ABOUT A CROSS original by TIM HORNE IT'S ALL ABOUT A CROSS (LYRICS) http://soundcloud.com/tim-horne/acousti ... -all-about It's not about Fri, 09 Dec 2011 18:53:57 GMT http://www.ultimatesongwriting.com/help-please-with-my-song-writing-assignment.html Hi I’m Josh Hill, I’m 15 and I am an aspiring song writer and have been since a young age. I am currently doing a B-Tec course in Music Technology. For Sun, 04 Dec 2011 19:12:13 GMT http://www.ultimatesongwriting.com/forget-to-forgetlyrics-critique113011by-zendaik.html I wrote these lyrics, for a song about something i have no experience with whatsoever. Please do not steal anything from my song-i will sue you. Forget Sat, 03 Dec 2011 15:08:58 GMT http://www.ultimatesongwriting.com/shes-my-intercity-girl-lyrics-critique.html She's my Intercity Girl.... (Lyric) She's my Urban live, She's My city lights, She's My Hood love, She's the first one I'm thinking of, She's my intercity Sat, 03 Dec 2011 15:08:40 GMT http://www.ultimatesongwriting.com/righteous-love-lyrics-critique.html righteous Love You shower me with Love.... O righteous Love U must be sent from the heaven's above.... O righteous Love.....Love Love..... OOO yeah Sat, 03 Dec 2011 15:06:39 GMT http://www.ultimatesongwriting.com/whos-your-lover-lyrics-critique.html Who's your lover, who's your man in and out of covers... I'll put no one above ya... I'll give u so much pleasure your heart is truly treasure my Tue, 29 Nov 2011 13:39:40 GMT http://www.ultimatesongwriting.com/in-the-house-of-love-lyrics-critique.html In the House of Love Is there a Place for me In the house of love..... Could you Welcome me into the house of love And forever it will be just Tue, 29 Nov 2011 13:37:35 GMT http://www.ultimatesongwriting.com/me-and-old-mike-lyrics-critique-country.html Author: John Knight ©2011 John Knight Me And Old Mike (Verse 1) Well I left Utah in my beat up car and forty three dollars in cash I headed east on Tue, 29 Nov 2011 13:37:01 GMT http://www.ultimatesongwriting.com/hook-line-and-sinker-lyrics-critique.html (Hook line and Sinker) R&B Hook line and Sinker...... Babe girl u were my anker the only girl I love in this world.... U were my foundation, a true Thu, 24 Nov 2011 15:47:30 GMT