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Songwriters Lyric Writing Critique - "just because you're a cop (it doesn't mean that we can't be friends)"

by brian
(central new york)

just because you're a cop it doesn't mean that we can't be friends
we both know what goes on deep inside where the alley ends
you're not surprised at all
what you saw last week when the news went down
your enemies become friends,
and your friends have just left town
just because your eyes were shut it doesn't mean you don't know how to kill
it doesn't matter what you've seen you can still smile when the blood spills
you're not surprised at all
it went down in your head last week where the floorboards creek
drive by night surprise, let's not lose our minds
bloodbath on the rise, we all go mad sometimes

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Songwriters Lyric Writing Critique - "just because you're a cop (it doesn't mean that we can't be friends)"

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Dec 20, 2008
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interesting
by: Anonymous

i really like this a lot. it is very different. do you have music for it?

Feb 09, 2009
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Read this comment plz
by: Anonymous

Het this is basically the only song on this whole blog i lked so congratz...do you write anything a little more dark? Im trying to start a screamo band and i can not writ to save my life do you have anyhting maybe you can send me??? email me at rdy4.nethng@yahoo.com no typos thts how my email is spelled

Mar 16, 2009
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hey
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hey this is really good i like it. what genre is it supposed to be though? you have alot of talent and i hope someday i'll hear one of your songs on the radio....keep it up

May 16, 2010
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