Songwriters Lyric Writing Critique - "just because you're a cop (it doesn't mean that we can't be friends)"

by brian
(central new york)

just because you're a cop it doesn't mean that we can't be friends
we both know what goes on deep inside where the alley ends
you're not surprised at all
what you saw last week when the news went down
your enemies become friends,
and your friends have just left town
just because your eyes were shut it doesn't mean you don't know how to kill
it doesn't matter what you've seen you can still smile when the blood spills
you're not surprised at all
it went down in your head last week where the floorboards creek
drive by night surprise, let's not lose our minds
bloodbath on the rise, we all go mad sometimes