Somewhere In South Caroline - lyrics critique

by Carter
(Souther Illinois)

This is an uptempo funk song and yes the title is misspelled on purpose its pronounced care-oh-line. Id really like feedback on this one so fire away.

Title: SOMEWHERE IN SOUTH CAROLINE

verse 1:
You took a one way ticket straight out of my heart
You left me feeling like i was gonna die
Said you met the one that you're goin to wed Way down in South Caroline
(background vocal:(and now you're off to)
Chorus:
Somewhere in South Caroline
Somewhere in South Caroline
Well i hear its nice out there Yea i know you'll be fine
Somewhere in South Caroline
verse 2:
Whoa even half the map away
You can never escape
All my good love and the memories we made
When things arent perfect
I'll be in the back of your mind
In that your takin' me with ya
(background vocal:(all the way to)
Chorus:
Somewhere in South Caroline
Somewhere in South Caroline
Well i hear its nice out there Yea i know you'll be fine
Somewhere in South Caroline
Verse 3:
I'll help you pack your things
We can cash in your ring
Anything that I can do to get you on your way
But no hard feelings
No I hope you enjoy the ride
(background vocal:(all the way to)
Chorus:
Somewhere in South Caroline
Somewhere in South Caroline
Well i hear its nice out there Yea i know you'll be fine
Somewhere in South Caroline