Something Told Me Lyrics Critique- Psychedelic Rock

by Jake
(USA)

something told me, this be over,
in a little while
come to think, i think that something,
was me
clutched fists, and fingers tied in tight
im at the peak
all my might i try to keep control, but, i
cant sieze
something told me, this be over
in a little while
come to think, i think that something,
was me

clumsy seconds, over hours, in the evening
racing by
ever deeper into blackness falling faster
am i
diggin deeper ,looking closer, falling faster
thru time
take my hand, all i have, push me over to
the other side

through these wasted moments cutting through
mundane
no light can pierce this overbearing blackness
pain,
i'll take a look inside the tunnel anyway
so i'll take my chances for the precious light is
worth the wait,
something told me, this be over,
in a little while
come to think, i think that something,
was me.