Something Special - slow (pop/punk) (need ideas)

by Dan

This is all I have , a song I'm writing for someone special
I need some feed back please
Are these any good?
What can make them better?
anything I could add?




Verse 1:
There’s something special
Bout the way you are
There’s something special
You glow brighter than the stars
There’s something special
It’s trapped inside my heart
(need more)



Chorus:
Do you think we’ll survive
If our hearts collide
Can we add another chapter
To our lives?
Doesn’t matter what we do
As long as it’s just me and you