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Someday - Lyrics Feedback

by Aisyah
(Singapore)

I lost my sanity
I'm falling so deeply
Into a deep, dark hole
Lost in the middle
What's wrong with me?

I've lost my way
I should've gone another way
Into your heart
Your empty, soulless heart
What's wrong with me?

And I got to the bottom
Feeling like I've been here before
And I know it's you
You're just like the others

(chorus)
You're gonna break my heart someday
Better make the most out of it
Before the day comes now
You're gonna leave me someday
I'm gonna be in pieces
And don't know how to mend it now
I feel like I can't let this go
When it comes to you

I've always known
I never wanted to believe
The truth that lies in front of me
Ever so obvious
What's wrong with me?

I'm always scared
I can't find another you
Who loved me right
But there's the consequences
What's wrong with me?

And I got to the bottom
Feeling like I've been here before
And I know it's you
You're just like the others

(chorus)

I should've let you go
If I knew what's going to happen
But why am I still holding on
I've got to let this go

(chorus)x2




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by: dave graves

nice lyrics i can feel the stuggle with in them and feel what your anger and love inermix within it....

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