'Snow In July' Lyrics Critique---Country Song

by Taylor
(Manitoba Canada)

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White Dark Clouds, flat tumbleweeds
Snow In July, clean air to breathe
Is this what its like, when your world is upside down
Its never fair when your loved ones are stolen
by powers unknows, they bring life to an awful end
Causing great grief and pain
But we've got to stand tall and be strong,
even if we need a shoulder to cry on, its going to be ok, things are going to get better
But the scars are still there, and you wont forget what was taken from you.

But you've gotta be a soldier
You've gotta be a rock
The endless war is raging
and you've gotta fight
Serving you country, is the highest deed
Dont forget what you signed up for
You've gotta win the war
If you can't continue
Find a fresh face

Running away--thats no option
We're going to win or we'll make peace
So remember
Always finish what you start
Theres no point in building a Genga Tower
If your not going to play
Dont doubt the troops
Their courage comes from the people.