Simon Lyrics Critique - Pop Song-These Past Few Days

by Simon K. Iyambo
(Brasilia, Brazil)

Verse 1 (A)
I woke up Monday morning with a migraine
And yesterday’s pain still shows in my eyes
A swollen heart, the day fades away again
So I lie here with pictures of the past

Chorus (B)
These past few days
Tryin’ to get through the rain
And these feelings remain
These past few days
Cause without you here I just can’t do this
These past few days

Verse 2 (A)
The head fights the heart but it’s a loosing game
In my solitude the silence screams inside
Swollen eyes, the rain fades in on me again
So I sit here just thinkin’ of the past

Chorus (B) x 2
These past few days
Tryin’ to get through the rain
And these feelings remain
These past few days
Tryin’ to get through the rain
These past few days
Same feelings still remain
Cause without you here I just can’t do this
These past few days

Coda
No without you here I just can’t do this
These past few days