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Sick - Lyrics Critique

Look at the people around you
Can't you see the suffering
The words they speak are so untrue
As are the promises they break
They throw stones at others hearts
And watch them as they fall apart

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I'm sick of all this pain and hate
I feel I'm gonna suffocate
Why can't we quit these selfish ways
And fully trust in Jesus' Name

There is hatred in so many
The kind have become too few
What did it take to get this way
What will it take to make it change
If we can stand together, never back down
The enemy will crumble to the ground




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