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Should of Lyrics Critique - Country

by Misti C
( Grantville, Georgia)

You came home late again tonight and didnt even call
I asked what you were doing and you said it didnt matter at all.

I told you just be careful cause your gonna miss this up.But You didnt seem to care about anything to do with saving us.

CHORUS: You should of done it my way you cant go back to yesterday. You had your chance to get it right but you messed it up again tonight.

I told you that I needed you; just to be around but all you want to do is put my feelings down.

Nothing I ever say seems to help us out cause all you ever do is go on and keep running around.

If I can't get you to care then i'm out this door today.
Ive stayed around way to long if all you want to do is play.

CHORUS: You shoud of done it my way. You can't go back to yesterday. You had your chance to get it right but you messed it up and again tonight.

I hope you know what your losing and that I'm always on your mind. I'm the one who has been hurt enough to leave this all behind.

In the blink of eye love can go so wrong it never works when one person trys to do it on her on.

Who ever said love hurts must have had someone like you who didnt care enough to do what he should do.

Chorus: You should of done it my way. You can't go back to yesterday. You had your chance to get it right but you messed it up again tonight.

Thanks for giving me a wake up call by you being you I found me afterall.





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by: Kristyn

I really liked this song.. I can kinda relate... lol it was really ood. keep writing

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