See you again Lyrics Critique- pop

by Atish
(Mauritius)

well i wrote this long ago, before knowing this website.. its my first ever written song n i know its not really good.. ! so tell me what you think about it n suggest me other titles for it plz!

Verse 1:
Your smile's what keeps me movin' around
Your eyes, i'm always thinkin' about
I've been lost and drownin' in their colour since the day that i saw you
Your face is the light up in my mind
Your voice is the sweet melody
That's been playin along in my head since the day thet i met you

I've been trying hard to get over your thoughts but you just don't wanna leave

Chorus:
How i wish i could
Go back to the day
I'd give anything to be there again
Tell me where you are
And I'll be waiting there
Cuz i can't wait no more to see you again
One more time

Verse 2:
So i sit down and watch the days go by
At night, i count the stars and wonder why
You seem so close to me, yet i'm far awaaaay
A little time and it'll make me lose my mind
I'm losing sleep, and it's got me goin' crazy
Everything i do feels so right, despite you're no by my side

I've been trying hard to get over your thoughts but you just don't wanna leave

Chorus:
How i wish i could
Go back to the day
I'd give anything to be there again
Tell me where you are
And I'll be waiting there
Cuz i can't wait no more to see you again
How i wish i could
Go back to the day
I'd give it all just to be there again
Wherever you will go
I will just follow
Cuz i can't wait no more to see you again
One more time...