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Scared Little Boy Lyrics Critique

by Kayla

(Verse 1)Were we perfect or was it just an illusion?
I was so happy,and I thought you were too.But I guess I've finally learned my lesson.And you taught it to me.
And believe me you taught it well.You scared little boy!

(Chorus)I've got to find my place in this world without you.Although I may hate it.You've given up on us for no apparent reason.And I want to know why.Have you forgotten the fire between us,that was lit the very first time we met,or were you just to afraid to tell me you loved me?You scared little boy.

(Verse 2)Now that I know about you and your lies,your schemes.I hope you enjoy your 15 minutes of shame.Go ahead and walk the plank.Baby walk the plank.Everybody has their heads turned.Their glares burning into you.And
You can't change it now,you scared little boy!

(Repeat chorus)

(Bridge)Now you've got what you deserve.I hope you're happy now.Cause I've finally given up on us.Is this what you wanted.Closure.Cause that's what you've got,you scared little boy!

I'm moving on.Got other things to do.Other sights to see.
That you were too cheap to see with me.I hope you're happy now.Burning up without me.Without a say.Cause your mistakes have finally caught up with you.You scared little boy.

(Repeat chorus)




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Scared Little Boy Lyrics Critique

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Apr 29, 2009
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great songs
by: nathaniel ortiz

your song was really good,u put alot of detail good job

Apr 30, 2009
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Thanks!
by: Author

Thanks for the comment! It's great to see that people like my lyrics.

Aug 21, 2009
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I'm sorry
by: Lonnie

I didn't like it. It has a good story but it was like reading a break-up letter. I'm reaklly sorry

Jan 02, 2010
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!!
by: Jessica

I like this song!! The concept and the way it's written is really good!!

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