Savior of Love Lyrics Critique

by Ally
(California)

Sitting alone, with both eyes closed
The image of you, sets in my mind
Standing beside me, holding a rose
Kissing me softly, but no one knows.

I remember the day you went off to be
A hero of war to save this country

Our love is a secret, the secret is love.
Our love is a battle, the battle of love.
Love is all that i need from you
As long as you promise to pull yourself through

Far away off into the war
Bombs explode and souls shriek out
Claiming the lives of more and more
He's still alive without a doubt
Risking his life to save the poor
Yelling his commands at a shout
They run for cover behind a door
An explosion drowns his words out

I remember the day you went off to be
A hero of war to save the country

Our love is a secret, the secret is love.
Our love is a battle, the battle of love.
Love is all that i need from you
As long as you promise to pull yourself through

I answer the phone with news so cruel
Rushed to the hospital in tears
Friendly fire caused this obscure
You're motionless body brings my fears

I remember the day you went of to be
A hero of war to save the country

Our love is a secret, the secret is love.
Our love is a battle, the battle of love.
Our secret saved you, the savior is love.