Sadist Lyrics - Rock song - Lyrics Critique

by Amara Bellez
(Lindenwold NJ)

I've been writing ever since i got into middle school, but I've never been that good with songs, but now im hopping since I feel alot of emotion about this topic it'll turn out koolio(Tell me ALL YOUR THOUGHTS!)


This is what I feel like the kind of relationship im stuck in with my "best freind". I love her like a duaghter, and I just try to see past all her flaws. But she steps on me, unintentanle in most cases(thats what i like to think anyway) and she hurts me so much. Our lives together is like a sick little game she's cheating in. And that she'll always win and get the best of me and I'll just let her take it 'cause I dont want to hurt anybody. Since it's all metaphoric, it'll sound like physical abuse.




Verse 1:
You've been waiting so long
alone and in the dark
to send this bullet straight through my heart
the pain gragles up my silent screams
and you know you've won
oh you've always played so wrong

Hook:
Do you like the feel of my bloodstain on your shirt?
Do you love the way you've gotten under me, just like dirt?

Chorous
Sadist
My sweet baby
I will always love you
But I dont want to
Sadist
My dear lady
I will always follow through
but you'll probably put me in hell

Verse 2:
I could try to run away
and never come back
But what kind of defense is that if i'll run straight back to the attack?
The truth in your words has routed me in place
and you'll know no matter what I'll always stay
Ohh how dumb it is to compare who I am and that whore in the mirror i face

Hook 2:
do you like the way the sound of my screams sound in your ear as they linger?
Do you love the feel of my blood, hot between your fingers?

Chorous:
Sadist
My sweet baby
I will always love you
But I dont want to
Sadist
My dear lady
I will always follow through
but you'll probably put me in hell

Bridge:
I loved you like a duaghter
Gave you the entire picture- all I had to offer
I gave you my own wings so you can fly
and looking back- ooo I can't comprehend all your mindless sluaghter!
oooooooo! Whoaoaoaa!
I loved you, you where like my duaghter,
You're so mad at me
I'm soppossed to be the strong one how could you make me cry???

Hook 3:
You've done nothing?
Bitch You've done everything.....

Chorous:
Sadist
My sweet baby
I will always love you
But I dont want to
Sadist
My dear lady
I will always follow through
but you'll probably put me in hell
(gunshot)