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Run with Scissors - - lyrics critique(:

by kelsey
(WISconSIN!)

ayy, yo. heres another one guys. (:


Run with scissors

If your voice was a blessing
I’d be an angel by now
If your touch, silver
I’d have more than her

So just put on your jersey
Coach is calling you out
Gotta get rolling
Its you’re turn (yet again)

It’s not like I run with scissors
You’re more dangerous anyway
Gotta keep to your rules
‘Cause there’s no other way to play
Time has taken his toll
I should’ve let you be
But I’ll stay on the bench
While you take all of me

Your mere sight a miracle
I’d believe it somehow
I’d let go of the past
As long as you were gone

So just put on your jersey
Coach is calling you out
Gotta get rolling
Its you’re turn (yet again)

It’s not like I run with scissors
You’re more dangerous anyway
Gotta keep to your rules
‘Cause there’s no other way to play
Time has taken his toll
I should’ve let you be
But I’ll stay on the bench
While you take all of me

(yeah, yeah)guess you don’t know what you got
(yeah, yeah) ‘til I’m gone, gone, gone
Its not like you cared; either way

so just put on your jersey (yeah)…

It’s not like I run with scissors
You’re more dangerous anyway
Gotta keep to your rules
‘Cause there’s no other way to play
Time has taken his toll
I should’ve let you be
But I’ll stay on the bench
While you take all of me
Take all of me, yeah, while you take all of me

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Jan 25, 2009
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great
by: Brendan

I really liked that :)

Feb 17, 2009
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amazing
by: Kerry-anne

i really related to it.
amazing work.

Apr 08, 2009
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great
by: Anonymous

haha nice! i like it! =D

Jun 06, 2009
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by: M-M-M

But I’ll stay on the bench
While you take all of me


love those lines they really hit me

Jul 07, 2009
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niceeee
by: Eilidh

i like the metaphor alot thought it made the song more relatable, because of the connotations of it :)

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