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Rinse and Repeat - Lyrics Critique

by Casey Allen Harris
(Phoenix, Arizona USA)

I’m really sore at the moment
And my heart is heavily beating
Seems I will never be defeating
The many dumb soft skin treatments

Now she starts to breath as normal
As my soul, ever more, is fading
She counts bills taken here for trading
While I wade through the dark portals
And fade into blackness
I walk into darkness

I will play along with it
As I’m feeling it, as I’m feeling you
I will play along with you
As I’m feeling you, as I’m feeling it
I want it to go away
But I force it out to play
…to cruelly play

She’s drunk and quite susceptible
To flattering of unwise intent
Spinning world moves and is prevalent
To show us nude – inescapable

She starts to puke as I’m thrusting
I’m too into it to ever stop
So close to the emotional drop
Self hate smells of metal rusting
Crumbling down to nothing
My life’s down to nothing

I will play along with it
As I’m feeling it, as I’m feeling you
I will play along with you
As I’m feeling you, as I’m feeling it
I want it to go away
But I force it out to play
…to cruelly play

I will play along with this
As I’m feeling this, as I’m feeling it
And as I’m feeling you
I will play along with you
As I’m feeling you, as I’m feeling it
And as I’m feeling this
I want it to die away
But I hold it out to play
…to cruelly play

It smells so good
It feels so good
This smells so good (I’m so bad)
This feels so good (I’m so fucking bad)
You smell so good (I’m so bad)
You feel so good (I’m so fucking bad)

This will pass
It will never last
This shall pass
It won’t ever last

Here comes the emotional drop (after it passes)
Here comes the emotional drop (after it passes)
Here comes the emotional drop (after it passes…I’m so bad)
Here comes the emotional drop (after it passes…I’m so fucking bad)

Here comes the emotional drop (after it passes…I’m so bad)
Here comes the emotional drop (after it passes…I’m so fucking bad)

This process shall repeat
Again and again
I’ll rinse and repeat

I’ll rinse and repeat
Again and again

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