"Ride or Die Lyrics Critique -R&B Song"

by Monica Edwards
(Marion, Alabama)

This is the first verse & Chorus i came up with please tell me what you think!! Be Honest!

Ride Or Die
(Intro-talking) You know i've been thinking, because i see, i see the pain you feel, but im here to tell you dont have to go through it because i ride or die for you.

Verse: I watch you from afar. I wanna be where you are to tell you i see the pain and baby it's ok. Don't have to feel that way because I am here to stay. Dnt have to cry so close your eyes & watch us shine.

Hook: I see it in my dreams. i see you & me. The kissin, the lovin, unconditionally. An if you should ever fall,Boy u dont have to call. I'll be there to catch you, & love you flaws & all.

Chorus:I know you been havin some problems, an i just wanna be your remedy. Now boy tell me if you're feelin me cuz im tellin no lies. Im here to diagnose your problem an whatever the issue im solvin em'. If u dnt get it im down 4 ya, Im your ride or die.