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Relax lyric critique Charlie in Alabama

by Charlie
(alabama)

Relax

Red bull wakes him up
Red lights make him crazy
A double shot of espresso
In a Styrofoam cup
Adderall takes off the edge
He‘s walking too close to the ledge
Over stimulated
Life’s too complicated

Take a breath
Relax
You’re living way too fast
Once today is gone
You cannot get it back
Take a little time today
Take a moment to pray
Everything will be ok
Relax

I know you’re in a hurry
But you don’t have to worry
I bet Aeropostale will have
Another moonlight sale
Learn to be yourself
Don’t follow someone else
Only you can truly
Find your way

So
Take a breath
Relax
You’re living way too fast
Once today is gone you cannot get it back
Take a little time today
Take a moment to pray
Everything will be ok
Relax

You can’t give up
What you can’t control
You can’t relax until you let it go

Take a breath
Relax
You’re living way too fast
Once today is gone you cannot get it back
Take a little time today
A moment to pray
Everything will be ok
Relax




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Relax lyric critique Charlie in Alabama

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Sep 04, 2011
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Whoah
by: Anonymous

Wow, it feels like you took the words straight from my mouth..its beautiful. Is there any way I can talk to you through email or something?

Sep 06, 2011
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ok
by: charlie

post your email here i'll contact you

Sep 06, 2011
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Very Good
by: liam

These lyrics are catchy and memorable, not to mention that they hold real meaning that I think a lot of people can relate to. Great job!

Jan 12, 2012
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ok !!
by: Anonymous

It's ok but the writtening needs more feeling,
sorry to tell you. (Knight)

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