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Your whole life your spendin Chacin this one dream
Wanna stop Swimming Main Stream
wanna Pop Women and they scream ahhhhhhh!
Remember Hot Shot Bilie Jean,beauty Queen,
usally seen with M.J on MTV,
on the Screen on the scene.
AGGGHHHHH,its Micheal in one Bed with MR. Bean Ahhhhh scream ahhhh
he likes the odd teen and... OMG you cud like me,
a P-E-R-V-E hihi dirty flirty so girly so neva heard-a-me
im jay lee hi so back to JAckson freak but deadly beats
read me his little stories then after he said sorry
he plays in bed with little kids hide and seek
then he cheats peeps and looks where their feet are so he can eat em like in jars!
haha


JUst somethin i wrote any good?