Rain Pours Down (I Wonder Why) - Lyrics Critique

by Catrionaa
(Nottingham)

I Wrote This Song On A Rainy Day (: It's About Someone Leaving Your Life And You Feel Miserable But Your Trying To Find Good Things, Things To Smile About. I Basically Just Wanna Know What Everyone Thinks So....Enjoy x

Verse 1
Everything, Looks The Same,
But You Were Gone Again,
I Try To Speak, No Words Come Out,
Your Voice My Favourite Sound,

I Stare Out The Window,
Debating What I'll See,
I See The Drops Of Water,
Falling By The Tree,

Chorus
And The Rain Falls Down On This Land,
Yes The Rain Falls Down On This Land,
It Sparkles In The Sunlight,
A Gift From The Clouds Above,
And I Stand Here And Wonder Why,
Oh I Stand Here And Wonder Why.

Verse 2
I Stand Here In Helplessness,
Wondering If You'll Call Me Back,
I Need To See You Once Again,
Even If You're Just Muy Friend,

I Stare Out The Window,
Hoping It Will Pass,
But The Drops Of Water,
Still Fall On The Grass,

Chorus

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