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"Prove Song Critique - Pop Song"

by Olivia Brown
(Tacoma, Washington)

olivia :)

olivia :)

You've got me on my knees
Begging please baby please

Can you prove to me, prove to me

That you can be the answers to my prayers?
Prove that you will swoop in when I'm scared?
Can you prove when i wanna hide,
You will be on the front lines?

Can you prove?
Can you prove?

You'll do everything you can dooo

Can you prove?
And prove the love you'll prove?
Can you prove?
Oh baby can you prove?

I know i ask alot
But all i want, yeah all i want
Is somebody to stand by me, even when we're weak
Im not saying I'm so worthy
So you've got to prove yourself to me
Noo
I'm calling for a high demand
Because i think you might be the man
But you gotta understand
That proving to me
Aint gonna easy

Yeeaahh

So you've got me on my knees
Begging please baby please
Can you prove to me, prove to me
That you you can be the one
To protect me from
The battle front
Can you prove ooohh
You'll make me bulletproof ooohh
And be on my team even if we lose noo
Ooohh can you prove? ooohh can you prove?
That you'll do everything you can doo
Yeeaah to prove the love you'll prove?
Oohh can you prove? ooohh can you prove?

You know I'd do the same yeaah
I do whatever it takes yeeah
But all i want you to say

Is that you can prove we're on the same page
yeaah
I'll hold you after a nightmare
Turn your foggy day into 75 and clear
I'll never pack my things
And tell you im leaving

Cause I'll, I'll prove to you ohh
Prove to you whooaa
I'll prove I'll stand up to any army
For my Prince Charming
No matter the size
I'll take on Goliath
Cause I'm not letting you down
Cause i promise to prove
That I'll do everything i can doo
To prove the love i prove
So that why I'm asking can i get that from youu?

I'm begging on my knees
Begging please baby
Can you prove to me, prove to me
That your apart of the deal who will put ip a shield
when times get rough on the battlefield
Who stays
When the pretty face goes fades away

Can you prove?
Can you prove?
That that's you
Can you prove
You'll still love me when I'm 89 covered in wrinkles and cellulite
Cause if your not prepared to stand here
Then I'll have to goo ohhh yeaah

That's why I'm begging on my knees
Begging please baby please
Prove to me, prove to me
That you wont leave yeeaahh
Can you prove? Can you prove?
You'll do everything you can doo ohh
To prove the love you'll prove ohh
ooohh ooh ooohh oooh oooh Can you prove? Can you prove? Can you prove? Can you prove?




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Apr 07, 2009
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I Think I Can!
by: Anonymous

Although I reasonably feel I'm more than able to prove my ability to do everything you mentioned in your song,I am not,unfortunately,prepared to do so as I've great goals to accomplish and dreams to materialize! The song is nonetheless very compelling and has great potential!

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