Pretty - Lyrics Critique

by Burch
(Boise, Idaho)

I wrote this songs chorus for a song my mom made up for me and my sisters. The song is pretty much about my mom and how she was like my rock when I was younger. I want to become a songwriter/singer so let me know what you think

VS 1
you were always there for me, yeah
goin out of you way
to make my dreams come true
you were right by my side
holding me together when I cried
singing

Chorus
Pretty Eyes Pretty Ears
Pretty mouth pretty nose
your so sweet from your head to your toes
your the sweetest little girl that I know

Vs 2
you never let me down
you could always grasp the smiles
through the frowns
you were the mom every girl needs
singin away the seeds
of doubt

Chorus
Pretty Eyes Pretty Ears
Pretty Mouth Pretty nose
your so sweet from you head to your toes
your the sweetest little girl that I know

Bridge:
I always took you for granted
now that Im older I can see
you were there for me
and Ill always hear your voice
singin

Chorus
Pretty eyes pretty ears
pretty mouth pretty nose
your so sweet from your head to your toes
your the sweetest little girl that I know