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pop song come back to me - lyric review

by Megan
(orlando, florida, U.S)

hi im 17 yrs old and this is my first song that i have written. Its really slow. plz don't be 2 harsh remember first song still trying to figure it out



u know u did me wrong
but u know were still so strong
i understand why u had to go
i just want u to come home
i still see ur face everywhere


im tryin to move on without u
but its just not the same
im tryin to live without u
but im dying babe
i need 2 see u
i need 2 hold
cant you see
i need you to come back to me


i saw u leave
but my heart won't accept it
u saw me cry
but it didn't keep u here
nothing can nothing will
but im


im tryin to move on without u
but its just not the same
im tryin to live without u
but im dying babe
i need 2 see u
i need 2 hold
cant you see
i need you to come back to me


i keep replaying in my head
wondering why u wanted her instead
what did i do wrong
how do i reverse time
because


im tryin to move on without u
but its just not the same
im tryin to live without u
but im dying babe
i need 2 see u
i need 2 hold
cant you see
i need you to come back to me




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pop song come back to me - lyric review

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Apr 26, 2009
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not bad
by: Anonymous

Don't worry.That actually wasn't that bad.I would totally listen to it.Comment one of my songs please.

May 16, 2009
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nice
by: rosie

I thought it was pretty good. does it have a title? i like the chorus. plz comment one of mine. i need somone else's opinion.

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