Petra- The waves of the ocean- lyrics critique- slow tempo

by Petra
(Australia)

Let me know what you think, I think it is useful for a slow tempo song.

Titelsong: the waves of he ocean

Verse:

I think life is like a musical journey
You have to listen to all it has to say
Life can be really that easy ,
Its oke to start and follow your heart,

Chorus:
I can hear in my dream , the waves of the ocean
I believe its real, I can feel the emotion
When I hear these waves, I don’t want this to end
Because I treat these waves as my friend

Verse:
The dreams you are in are not the real thing
You need the dreams to get escape in life
The message of this dreams ,you have to listen
The waves in this dream help you survive

Chorus:
I can hear in my dream , the waves of the ocean
I know its real, I can feel the emotion
When I hear these waves, I don’t want this to end
Because I treat these waves as my friend

Bridge:
I enjoy my life I am not afraid anymore
I now listen to this dreams thats for sure
The music in my life will be my guideline,
The waves the waves, I will shine, as long as I live

Chorus:
I can hear in my dream , the waves of the ocean
I know its real, I can feel the emotion
When I hear these waves, I don’t want this to end
Because I treat these waves as my friend