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Perfect One For Me - slow country- Lyrics Critique

by Kristyn
(WV)

This song is a slow country beat and i really want opinions on it... let me know :)
Perfect One For Me

When I hold you
I love the feelings inside me
And have I told you
We can’t be stopped by anybody
So, no matter when
Or where we are
I’ve wanted to be with you
Since the day you stole my heart

When we touch
Sparks fly
And when I look into your eyes
I know
I was born to say I love you
My day could be going all wrong
And I couldn’t be more unhappy
Until I see your face
And I know
I was born to say I love you

When I see you
The butterflies come to life
And have I told you
I always wanna be by your side
And when I hear
Your sweet name
I feel like dancing in the rain

When we touch
Sparks fly
And when I look into your eyes
I know
I was born to say I love you
My day could be going all wrong
And I couldn’t be more unhappy
Until I see your face
And I know
I was born to say I love you

Everything you do drives me insane
And I fall deeper into love
And when we kiss, my heart dissolves
And I can’t ever get enough
I can’t concentrate cause
I can’t stop thinking about you
You so kind and sweet
Oh you’re the perfect one for me

When we touch
Sparks fly
And when I look into your eyes
I know
I was born to say I love you
My day could be going all wrong
And I couldn’t be more unhappy
Until I see your face
And I know
I was born to say I love you

When we touch
Sparks fly
And when I look into your eyes
I know
I was born to say I love you




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Perfect One For Me - slow country- Lyrics Critique

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Dec 20, 2010
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A real country lovesong
by: Anonymous

The lyrics are good, it is a positive lovesong, for a change.
I really feel the words.

Feb 08, 2011
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thnx
by: Kristyn

Thank You! I wrote it for my friends that recently fell head over heels in love and it was stragne how i wrote this song, but I'm glad you liked it!

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