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Perestroika (incomplete)- rap metal - lyrics critique

this is my first song, so dont be too hard

V1:
Destruction, walking through the streets of Abandonment, population 2,000,000 and growing each day

Reforming the government, striking at your heels are Greed and Injustice, the creations of Satan himself.

Chorous:
Waiting for the perestroika...(waiting for the perestroika)
waiting for the perestroika, waiting for the reforming, can you smell the blood thats flowing, can you hear the tanks are rolling, can you feel the soldiers marching, can you taste the revolution? while we're waiting for the perestroika.(waiting for the perestroika)

V2:
Blood falling down like rain from the sky, gunshots blasting, flying by. civilians running, crying, lying there, dying there like deaf, mute dummies unable to care.

Ghosts of the past unable to see, all of the greed that capitalism made, the poor become poorer, the rich become richer, with absolutely no balance of gain.

(chorous Repeat)

(guitar solo)




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Perestroika (incomplete)- rap metal - lyrics critique

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Jun 10, 2009
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not done
by: Jack Kern (the guy who wrote this)

this song is not done and im still working on it

Oct 07, 2009
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nice. or not nice. well put.
by: Anonymous

nice work dude!

Mar 04, 2010
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what are you getn at
by: phantom

your too deep man and your using to many big words...i dont find your lyrics interesting...you got good content but keep it entertaing.

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