Pawned Her Ring Today Lyrics Critique ...Country ballad slow tempo for male singer

by Carter
(southern illinois)

This is just a rough draft tell me if you think i should go on or just scratch it

Pawned Her Ring Today

Verse 1
I've put the bottle down
I'm doin' good at givin' it up
And to my suprise
I've slept just fine
I finally seen the sun come up
Now I can face the day
In a brand-new light


Chorus
Because I pawned her ring today
It was just collectin' dust
A memory of yes-ter-day, an old keepsake
So I pawned her ring today
For a new chapter in my life
Ya know I'm gonna be ok
I'm gonna be ok tonight

Verse 2
All the hurtin's over
Im makin' it sober
I can breathe a little easier
And walk a little lighter
I don't have the weight of the world
On my shoulders any longer
(repeat chorus x2)