Only in stories (lyrics critique) -Pop/Rock song

by Alyssa
(Milwaukee, Wisconsin, USA)

The life of a young girl, the life of young girl. Lives in fairy tale full of ponies and princes. The life she lives is a lie. Waiting for her prince to get her. Waiting for a prince to bring down dragon, but he cant cuz its her life. If he does her world shatter. That magical kiss that she wishes for will only never happen. Cuz her life is lie

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Come on now princess, learn to fend for yourself, yourself. Come on now do you really think hes the answer to it all? You don’t need him at at all.Now save yourself don’t depend on no one else. No one. Now think real hard cuz ive got message. So newflash princess fairy tales are only in stories.

She sits in her tower. She sits in her tower. Not knowin what to do. Shes been secluded from the world. Sits on her bench and combs her long hair and still waits. But wat she doesn’t will hurt her. And why he hasn’t come cuz reality has beat her to him.

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Everyone has moved passed her stage. Of magic and wonder, it’s a wondershes not like them but she still waits. Someone please knock some sense into her. Cuz fairy tales are good for a while andand fairy tales block you from everything in reality.
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(I don't think it rhymes much.... Do all songs have to rhyme? I kind of need help with writing songs. I got inspiration fom this song from Paramore's Brick by boring Brick. Its not the same beat though.