OMG lyrics critique - pop

by Kayla Bean
(PA)

I don't like it a lot but I think it might have potential. If you have any advice please tell me!!!! I am still thinking of a title.

V1. Kissing, hugging, just for fun. No one around it’s just us. Is it getting hot or is it just me. I never thought it would end like this. You were shy and so was I. We talked and talked with no reason why. Dancing on the floor without a care. Never thought it would end like this.

C. OMG, oh my gosh, I can’t believe what I just saw. OMG, oh my gosh, I can’t believe what I just saw. Blonde hair short shorts walking talking hand in hand, She is kissing my man, she is kissing. I can’t believe it. Can’t wait to see her…..

V2. Dumping her would be sweet revenge. If you did it you would be my best friend. But if you don’t I don’t care. You already made it end like this. You told lies but talk is cheap. Stuff that no one will ever believe. Cuz you have told lies in the past. You already made it end like this.

C2. OMG, oh my gosh, I can’t believe what I just saw. OMG, oh my gosh, I can’t believe what I just saw. Brunette, cheerleader trying to steal my boyfriend. She isn’t succeeding, no no. I can’t believe it can’t wait to meet her.

Bridge. So I could tell her, tell her. That you are hers now. Cuz you broke my heart and now I’m gonna drop a bomb on you. Now that I’ve moved on I don’t care what you do with your life. Just don’t include me.

Goodbye, good good good goodbye, honey I’m leaving you. Goodbye.