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Obama Save Me - Lyrics Feedback

by Charlie in Alabama
(Alabama)



You could say I’ve had some bad luck.
Well, where do I begin?
I‘ve been turned down more than a bed spread,
at the local Holiday Inn.
I see big business getting rescued,
By our congress and the Prez.
Why don’t they ever try to help?
The little guy instead?

Oh, Bail me out,
Prop me up,
Obama save me.
What happened to the stimulus check?
George Bush gave me?
Send more money, this ain’t funny,
Oh, Freddie Mae.
All we need is another,
Government
Give away.

They say we must reform,
Our health care.
Hell, health care here is the only thing,
That works
If you don’t like the way,
The Doctor treats you.
You can go to Canada,
When you get hurt.

Oh, Bail me out,
Prop me up,
Obama save me.
What happened to the stimulus check?
That you gave me?
Send me money, this ain’t funny,
Oh, Freddie Mae.
All we need is another,
Government
give away.

They say Congress is working,
On a solution.
While my neighbor is plot-in
A revolution.
If gun control cuts down crime.
Banning watches
Would save us time?
You know, plain old common sense
Has no sub-sti-tution.

Oh, Bail me out,
Prop me up,
Obama, save me.
What happened to the stimulus check?
George Bush gave me?
Send me money, this ain’t funny,
Oh, Freddie Mae.
All we need is another,
Government
Give away.




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Dec 17, 2009
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lol
by: andrew

was literally laughing out loud at this one, love the line about banning watches and also health care in canada. though politically i consider myself neutral you raise valid points and do it in an entertaining way. great stuff

Jan 01, 2010
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awesome
by: Anonymous

awesome song! it was very entertaining. i can't wait to see more of your work.

Jul 12, 2010
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WOW
by: Paddy

Please make this, get yourself a record deal and record this im singing it my head and its amazing, its hilarious

Nov 14, 2010
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PERFECT
by: Anonymous

Wow, catchy rhymes AND absolutely valid political points!! Could we just rush this to the White House (or the studio) right now?? Hahahaha!!!

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