Nows My Time Lyric critique - Rap song

by Dec Tomlinson
(Luton, Bedforshire, England)

my thoughts are slightly dazed,
right now my lifes a maze,
i dont know where to go,
il put on a show,
for my fans then im back off home,
but i cant stay there,
need to get outta here,
im full of fear,
im not risking it,
everythings spinning round,
just hear a fuzzy sound,
need to try again,
whats happening,

thought i was living my dream,
well thats what it seemed,
people carrying on with their life,
im stuck and spinning in mine,
gotta make it count,
cause nows my time

thoughts and dreams,
there all flying above,
like lost souls,
if thats what you call them,
losing my balance,
feels like im on a tight rope,
gunna fall off,
out to space,
outta this maze,
just wanna sleep,
im too deep,
im tripping under,
head feels like thunder

thought i was living my dream,
well thats what it seemed,
people carrying on with their life,
im stuck and spinning in mine,
gotta make it count,
cause nows my time,

gunna keep fighting,
wont give up,
need to get through,
need to recover,
minds in different places,
dotted around everywhere,
nothing ever fair,
throw it to one side,
wondered off the path,
away to my own world,
its not me its you,
im walkign with the clouds,
but my feet on on the ground,

thought i was living my dream,
well thats what it seemed,
people carrying on with their life,
im stuck and spinning in mine,
gotta make it count,
cause nows my time,