Now You Know - Lyric Critique

by Sam

All right, I just wrote this in five min. I've written ones that were twenty times better but this is kind of a new technique I've been using. It's a bit inspired by Taylor Swift. Country/alternative. Please be honest in your feedback!

(V1)Starting today your phone will stop ringing
Cause I?m sick of hearing reasons
On why you didn?t show
Starting today you will wish
You didn?t take my love for granted
Well, now I guess you know
Do you know?

(C)I?m burning pictures as we talk
Forgetting the path in your woods
We walked for miles and miles
Now I can?t even recall your smile
I?m saying goodbye
To all your stupid, filthy lies
You said you want to be alone
Now you now

(V2)As I think about it
This thing started falling apart weeks ago
Maybe I was too blind
But you were filling me with lies
Until they clouded my eyes
Do not try to explain why
So you could leave with a clean conscience