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There is a clock outside my window
That tells me where I am
The timeline of my life is not exactly
The way I planned
I'm covered in scars
And stained with blood
Because of what I've done
I think I need to go to sleep and wake up someone else
Or else I'll have to start all over again

We need to watch the pain
Oh, watch the time
Watch me, every night