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Not This Time - Songwriter Lyric Feedback

by Krizia Leah Apelar
(Long Beach, California, USA)

Verse 1: Why do you have to make things so complicated?/
Is this what we have become?/
Well tough luck to you/
You know we almost made it/
After all we’ve been through/
I’ve just grown to hate it/

Chorus 1: It’s not alright to tame something so great, that could have been/ I’m tired of being the only one to dream for us/ I’m so tired/ so tired for us/ It’s not right/ not this time/

Verse 2: Does it seem like I am always this insecure?/
But do you even know what you want?/
Well you wanted it too/
I guess we couldn’t take it/
What kind of care do you proof?/
You made me brokenhearted/

Chorus 1
Chorus 2: I didn’t wait for nothing but for something great, that could have been/ I just wanted to be your everything/ Like the sun, I was always there to shine on you/ you need to try hard, you need to man up now/

breakdown:
Just go cuz I’m over it/ this is nothing/ this is nothing/
Just go cuz you’re over it/ we are nothing/ we are nothing…now/




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Not This Time - Songwriter Lyric Feedback

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Dec 12, 2008
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Awesome
by: Amber

Wow this is really good.
I was singing it already.=)

Dec 31, 2008
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very good
by: d olsen

krizia your song is very good what style of music have you put to this

Apr 09, 2009
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GOOD JOB
by: NATHANIEL ORTIZ

I KNOW WE DONT KNOW EACH OTHER BT UR SONG IS REALLY GUD

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