Not sure of a title, songwriters lyrics critique

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Not sure of a title, songwriters lyrics critique

by Joey
(Chesterton, IN, USA)

This is going to be the first song i've ever written. I've only been able to write the chorus, since I've been super busy getting ready for finals. I wanted to get some feedback on what i had so far. I'll post the other parts as soon as i finish them. THANKS

You called me up
said we need to talk now
nothing i could say, i was lost in you
shoulda took you up on that damn beach walk
now i'm just waitin, prayin for a girl like you

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Dec 12, 2008
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Good Start
by: Ami

Good start, I'm a novice song writer myself. The song did grab my attention, when you said the the chick called you up and said we need to talk now. That something us chicks do when we are really upset and we are feigning emotional control. Good job.

Dec 21, 2008
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clear me up
by: Anonymous

um can you tell me the theme? I mean is the song about a break up since you meantioned "we need to talk now" or is it about getting started cause you mentioned "waiting and praying for a girl like you"

Jan 06, 2009
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by: Anonymous

the song is about a break up

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