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(no title yet - lyric critique

by mikayla

Turn up your television
turn it up high
i dont want to hear them
i dont want to cry
sometimes it confusing
sometimes its bruising
Their using words
ive never heard:
shmooze na uh
rambooze uh uh
Its like someone... turned on the heat
They babble and scrabble
and i dont know what to believe
O'C'mon who the hell is Steve.
shes yelling , no wait ,thats him.
na uh ..

oh i wish they were saying
shmooze and rambooze
na uh
now i'll i caan hear is the truth.

Dinner is ready! C'mon now or no food.
option 1 take
option 2 leave it!





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Dec 17, 2009
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style and grace
by: andrew

haha love your style, feels light and carefree, kinda reminds me of jack white. it also had distinct rhythm great stuff!

Dec 17, 2009
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Lol
by: Anonymous

Thnxx so much :P

Dec 29, 2009
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o.k
by: Gerald

it' s fine but i did not get the flow, try to structure it so that listeners can follow what u r talkin about.

Dec 29, 2009
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dying to write
by: Anonymous

i didnt even know what i was going for
i just went for it but thnxx

Oct 25, 2010
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:]
by: Anonymous

love it:]

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